AS TEARS ROLLED DOWN MY CHEEKS!
As tears rolled down my cheeks,
I thought... ๐ญ
Why should sadness - ONLY to me
Be brought?
That time, a tear came in front of me,
And said:
This is the path
Every human has to tread.
For sweetest things
Turn sourest by their deeds,
Lilies that fester,
Smell far worse than weeds!
I am forced to trickle down your eyes,
Because of what you do:
O that you gave a penny
To the hungry beggar whom you shoed!
Your family, whom you call
"As precious as a gem" ๐ ,
Did you spare a moment from your phone,
To care for them?
You heartily pose for a selfie
To show how happy you are,
But did you apologize to your 'enemy'
Whom you fought with, and gave a scar?
You expect everyone
To speak well with you,
But for how rudely you speak to ur fellows,
Your mouth you should beshrew!
What humans did to nature,
Is being reflected today.
And for the torture to animals,
You have a heavy price to pay.
What you do today,
Will come to you tomorrow.
So don't do any misdeed,
Because of which you'll have a curse to borrow!
I am speaking the words
Your heart ♥ couldn't express,
But deep down,
Was making you depressed.
I clean the wounds of your troubled soul,
When your pains start taking a huge toll.
I am a way for you to repent,
So that you no longer have to lament!
So, do GOOD deeds
And I'll never come to you
You should smile☺ again,
Is my motto, to be true :)
ANANYA MALHOTRA
30 MAY 2020
Heart touching poem.❤❤Love ur all creativites
ReplyDeleteReally great. Very well written and expressed. Most relevant in today's time. Keep up the good work. Just literally super se bhi upar. Suppeeeer. Really loved it ๐๐ฅฐ๐๐๐ธ✨๐ธ✨๐๐๐ ๐ ๐ ๐
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ReplyDeleteSuperb work... Great job... So beautifully written... Every word touched my heart... Such an optimistic poem... Keep the good work going... ๐ฅฐ๐
ReplyDeletegood nhi super se bhi upar wala good ,Outstanding,Excellent⭐๐ซ⭐⭐
ReplyDeleteSoo exquisitely written๐ฏ๐ฅ My Cutie๐น
ReplyDeleteVeryyyy welll written ๐๐๐
ReplyDeleteCreativity is in peak in this poem ..Very well written
ReplyDeleteWoah what a poem .u wrote this!!!!!!this is beautiful and is actually true.wonderful poem. U should definitely write more❤
ReplyDeleteOk....so the poem...its absolutely amazing as all ur other works are...
ReplyDeleteSome lines were really really heart touching
And that photo of comparison: if humans go extinct vs if nature goes extinct was well put in
And also....the 'about' is so well written
'miles to go before I sleep'.... Human being to being human....n all other things
These are phrases we've all heard before but you know how and where to correctly use them๐
Good job๐๐ป
(p.s. I actually never even had a live one on one conversation with you...but the way u write n talk... Feels like I've known u since long๐♥️✨)
The reason being....after talking to u or reading any of ur works....m always like thankfully someone in this age does understand the value of real things and not materialistic.... seemingly "cool" things✨
(~Sadhavi☺️)
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ReplyDeleteVery nice poem beta. Very well written. Its worth this appreciation. Keep it up. Really fantastic ❤๐
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ReplyDeleteGood work dear... .I just love the way these emotions are expressed through ur poems...we can actually feel all this while reading.. Keep up ur good work, proud of u.. U can really do wonders... Gud luck ������
ReplyDeleteDidi you write very nice may you write so many more beautiful poems forever๐๐
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